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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

How this stanza goes:

"becoming One is

rhythmically unstable."

It is for me a state of in-between, simultaneously saying and not saying that it's impossible, especially the way it finds its way into the river. More than meets the inattentive eye for sure!

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Brandon  Murphy's avatar

Absolutely stellar yet again. The imagery and subtext, the duel nature of it.

I need to work on vernacular because constantly calling you poetry beautiful is no longer enough when you are putting out this level of art.

This was definitely the cherry on top of a bitchin day.

Literally always a pleasure, and never enough.

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