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Nick Winney's avatar

gosh !

Hard to grasp the fluttering and at the same time strong beating wings of this poem.

im trying to put my mind into yours when you wrote this.

very affecting.

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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

I find the juxtaposition of birds with the reiterations of death profound, heartbreaking, and at the same time, not in small part because of the last stanza, truly liberating. Birds never cease to inspire.

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