The Closing Tin
(Poetry) A Free Verse Poem
Vat of perfumed passengers, pack like canned fish: an impatient hand jams its fingers in the closing tin Glass-clad tunnel-darkness spies draught of hooked necks, red herring faces, blue light tailrace, ram ventilation Each stop is a testament to human progress: so many stinking bodies and not a single casualty
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excellent.
I do so enjoy poems that expand on the mundane moments of society, this was really great thank you for sharing!